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johnplywd
02-19-2009, 05:38 AM
run bitch run
chase her with a shotgun
when she turns around
I will gun her down

gutshot, she falls
I stand over her
as she crawls
rip open her shirt
pull off her bra
on her bloody tits I gnaw

this will be fun
her blood will make me cum
bleed until i am done

starring into her eyes
soon she will die
in hell I will fry
this is no lie


she says her final prayer
life is so unfair
in her final resting place
the last thing she saw was my face

Lao Tzu
02-19-2009, 02:52 PM
perfection

Pringles
02-20-2009, 12:50 AM
Absolutely beautiful! :applaud: Keep up the great work! You should seriously copy right all your work and make a book. I would buy it.

alex333
02-20-2009, 01:00 AM
honestly, i thought it would be a joke at first from the title. suprisingly, it was pretty good.

FoolishImp
02-21-2009, 12:21 AM
when that baby pops out
it'll die theres no doubt
I stomp its head like a door mat
haha the head goes splat

the bitch will scream
so i'll beat her so bad
she'll think it was a dream
as she wakes from her coma
i'll kick her in the face
getting pregger is such a disgrace

then i'll take a toke
her crying is just a joke
cause her jaw is already broke

laying on the ground
she best not get up
i'll do it again yup
her body again i'll pound

she says your a schmuck
and I'm like what the fuck
so I smash a chair on her head
I'm happy now she's dead

I did my best to replicate OP's style. Good job.

Pringles
02-21-2009, 03:07 AM
^^^ good work.

Dr.Moo
02-21-2009, 11:24 AM
:: claps ::

I don't know what to say. It made me laugh. I found myself aroused. Then she died, amazing, just amazing.

::clap clap ::