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Alamo
03-09-2009, 04:46 AM
I guess I should say here we go lol, started somewhere in the picture and ended about here. Ideas, comments,CRITIQUE! heh all criticism appreciated. :p

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v375/Lordarc/DSCF0120-1.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v375/Lordarc/DSCF0119.jpg
Your Local Crack Dealer
03-09-2009, 04:57 AM
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Idiot
03-09-2009, 07:28 PM
Looks good, I like the whole trippy theme you have going there. You have a good understanding of basic perspective, it just looks like you got lazy in some parts:D

For example, the guy who has the "deputy of infinity", his gun, and his arm, and his hand are all "off". The hand closest to the viewer is too big to come from his body. And the body itself shouldn't be leaning so much unless you wanted to give the viewer the feeling he is floating.

Second picture is nice. Just keep your lines cleaner.

If you added some serious shading to both those pictures they could look insane. The whole concept gets an A+ though.

keep posting!
Miaow
03-09-2009, 11:33 PM
It looks pretty cool, but it does seem to me like you've just said ''what can I draw that's trippy?'' and went with it. That's just my opinion though.

http://www.tgeller.com/graphics/livejournal/20080918-dude.jpg
Alamo
03-10-2009, 11:02 PM
It looks pretty cool, but it does seem to me like you've just said ''what can I draw that's trippy?'' and went with it. That's just my opinion though.

http://www.tgeller.com/graphics/livejournal/20080918-dude.jpg

Heh yeah, I start out sketching smaller pictures and just do too many and end up linking them all together or at least trying to get the picture to flow. I usually don't have a singular object in my head to draw, most of the time if someone gives me something to draw I can replicate it in my style decent. Care to suggestion :p!

As for the lazy yeah, I am going to shade it this weekend hopefully. I guess the way I like to sketch is pretty dirty as I make 10 passes or so for a line. I will find some color pencil works I have that are just taking the blending to extreme "sunset/ocean/GREEN floating island" and the 5k+ strokes probably lol. Thx for the feedback