View Full Version : A Poem. Why do we treat ourselves as hapless nonbelievers. Whreeeeeeee?
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You are the lizard man whose scales i do tear 'part!
Oh thank you kindly wizard man your staff now pierces through your heart.
What does it take you jizard man whos penis has no reconciling?
Why does he jerk off on girls who go run off and crying.
Dr.Moo
04-04-2009, 11:37 AM
I don't get it, but I like it!
I'd like it moar though if you trimmed some words out of each line to make it shorter. Possibly it could have a good rhythm and I could mumble it to myself all day long and look insane.
Magpie_Tendencies
04-11-2009, 10:08 AM
I don't get it, but I like it!
I'd like it moar though if you trimmed some words out of each line to make it shorter. Possibly it could have a good rhythm and I could mumble it to myself all day long and look insane.
Oh, this!
Let's work on it so I can do this!
It could be catchy.
I am glide you both like this piece. Ill consider a revised version and get back to you with it within the next week.
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