Got a Lite?
05-13-2009, 04:57 AM
Those cold nights heat up when you’re not around
I can stare at the moon and count the stars
And it occupies my time better
No longer will I have to sit inside until you pass by
Writing about you without you mucking it up
My words finally not drowned away
In time I’ll look back and laugh at my hatred
And how I used to try to dance to your music
Still in those moments of peace and rest
You drift through my blurry visions
No longer here but always there
Darkening my world
Just wanted to get some comments on it. Some people around me like my writing, but I always find it lacking.
I can stare at the moon and count the stars
And it occupies my time better
No longer will I have to sit inside until you pass by
Writing about you without you mucking it up
My words finally not drowned away
In time I’ll look back and laugh at my hatred
And how I used to try to dance to your music
Still in those moments of peace and rest
You drift through my blurry visions
No longer here but always there
Darkening my world
Just wanted to get some comments on it. Some people around me like my writing, but I always find it lacking.