When Things Collapse.

[Toothlessjoe]

When things collapse the space
surrounding rushes to fill it and
we roll like thunder
across the plain
invisibly.

When things collapse the world
implodes wearing stripes that
blur like memories
blur like fictions
bleed and wrap

in a double-helix embrace
until pressed toward singularity.

But fuck it. I don't have it in me
to care anymore. When things
come crashing I'll smile a little
smile and I'll shrug a little shrug
and walk in ruin. Because

When things collapse I think
I might feel a little more alive.

[Erorr]

you said fuck in a poem , so fail.


( in all seriousness though , its ok. The structure kind of pissed me off but beyond that the concept and imagery was good)

[PROJECT PAT]

please stop posting this shit. just stop writing poetry dude.