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Toothlessjoe
07-31-2009, 03:21 PM
There was this corporate christmas party
today i went to, albeit
begrudgingly.

And my first problem was
--no booze.
not a god damn drop in
the place except in pocket
flasks that only saw light
in bathroom stalls and
on the way.

My second problem was a prayer
a good, hearty prayer
which threatened my salad and
made the lettuce taste bitter and old
like a spent radish discarded
for its demeanor. But I continued
eating through it, and flashed
my teeth like a dog.

And yeah, hell yeah, I understand
that it's supposed to be the
big guy's b-day and all,
even though the date is five
months off by biblical accounts, and

yes, hell yes, I understand that
christmas is supposed to be about
the christ and whatnot, that big
passive-aggressive guy in the sky
who doesn't seem to give a lick about
the little people downstairs

but Jesus!

What kind of asshole needs people to thank
Him Him Him for food
that a catering service cooked
for nigh minimum wage while
some of their children starve and
brothers and sisters hook for crack
or blow up
making meth or
getting shot and raped or
molested?

But really, what really pissed me off
really

was that it lasted so long and
by the time it was done
so was my buzz
from the way over.

If I were Jesus, I'd rather be drank to.
That's a religion I could practice

and perfect.

ysr2096
07-31-2009, 03:27 PM
It's July (or August!).

How exactly did you attend a Christmas party in July (or August!)?

naterd00d
07-31-2009, 03:29 PM
i love how you used drank instead of drunk at the end

+1, amazing, i feel the same way

Toothlessjoe
07-31-2009, 03:30 PM
It's July (or August!).

How exactly did you attend a Christmas party in July (or August!)?

You'll enjoy literature much more if you use some imgination :p.

ysr2096
07-31-2009, 03:41 PM
You'll enjoy literature much more if you use some imgination :p.

I doubt it.

I only read non-fiction and I particularly dislike fantasy.

Toothlessjoe
08-10-2009, 06:37 AM
I doubt it.

I only read non-fiction and I particularly dislike fantasy.

I suggest you avoid this forum in the future then.

Uber_Apples
08-10-2009, 06:39 AM
i love how you used drank instead of drunk at the end

+1, amazing, i feel the same way

He used drank correctly, on the other hand drunk would be incorrect

ysr2096
08-10-2009, 06:46 AM
I suggest you avoid this forum in the future then.

No. Why don't you just piss off if you're going to start shit?

Toothlessjoe
08-10-2009, 06:52 AM
No. Why don't you just piss off if you're going to start shit?

You're opened conversation up by being facetious :rolleyes:.

I'm not starting anything. I'm merely pointing out that you've admitted you aren't a fan of this kind of literature so it might pay you to not frequent the forum if you're just going to make off the cuff witticisms and not to find any other enjoyment here.

Please try not to reply to this, I have little else to say to you about this matter. Critique my work though by all means.

ysr2096
08-10-2009, 06:57 AM
You're opened conversation up by being facetious :rolleyes:.

I'm not starting anything. I'm merely pointing out that you've admitted you aren't a fan of this kind of literature so it might pay you to not frequent the forum if you're just going to make off the cuff witticisms and not to find any other enjoyment here.

Please try not to reply to this, I have little else to say to you about this matter. Critique my work though by all means.

Your work sux because Christmas doesn't happen in August.

Uber_Apples
08-10-2009, 08:12 AM
LOL

truckfixr
08-16-2009, 04:26 PM
Your work sux because Christmas doesn't happen in August.

No offense intended, but I believe you misread his post:

" And yeah, hell yeah, I understand
that it's supposed to be the
big guy's b-day and all,
even though the date is five
months off by biblical accounts,..."

The party was actually at Christmas time. The biblical account has the birth of Jesus in the summer.