Timekiller

[Dionysus]

I saw the best minds of my generation destroyed by madness, starving naked hysterical.

I hysterically saw best naked minds destroyed by the starving madness of my generation

Starving, Naked I saw my mind destroyed by madness, by best hysterics of the generation

The starvation destroyed the best madness of my generation’s minds, I saw hysterically, naked.

Naked of madness, the best generation saw my mind, destroyed by starving the hysterical

Madness saw the hysterical destroy the starving, I saw myself naked minding the generation

The generation of the best hysterical minds saw the naked lead the starving and mad to destruction

Mad and starving, my mind saw the destruction of my generation, I was hysterical

I saw the worst minds of my generation elated by madness, starving naked hysterical

The destruction of the hysterical frees the mad and naked; I saw them starve on reality

Naked madness hysterically starved on the minds of a generation destroyed by the best

Best not starve, naked whilst the minds of a generation madly flagellate the hysterical

Mind the naked and see the mad, hysterical what the best minds of my generation destroy

Generations of minds lead to only a hysterical madness, the starving will hide naked from the betters

[RosettaStoned]

Wow. This was really cool man. My only problem with this was that the second half you changed a word or two every line, but the first ones you just switched the wording around, and it makes less and less sense. So I'd re-adjust those first few ones (excluding the very first). The rest is great though, and I love how it just builds on the same thing to just completely twist it around. Thanks for posting man, I always enjoy reading your work.

[Dionysus]

I started out just having fun playing with the words, but after 15 minutes it started to feel like work, so I started to improvise. In my defence I was pretty stoned. Thanks for the feedback man.

The whole time I was writing I was thinking of how it would look in a cutup, pretentious film...

[Uber_Apples]

lolwut

[RosettaStoned]

lolwut

I really don't need ridiculous remarks like this. It's a poem. You can tell this by what forum you happen to be in. In case you didn't notice, this is Original Works, in The Book Nook. Get fucking with it or just stay out man.

[CanadianPenguin]

A woman, without her man, is nothing
A woman: without her man is nothing