Drummer sucks, riffs suck. Fucking do something original. I know being in a band and producing something you can all agree upon is difficult, so certain members' potentially good ideas can be overlooked or thrown out, but you really need to do something different from all the other metal bands out there.
"you dont need to have a fucking puncuation to read what im writeing" - savages_viper
Honestly? Poorly written, poorly played and poorly recorded; generic and banal. Like the above poster says, this shit has been done 5.4 x 10^2348 times, so unless the only thing you're going for is to be another generic metal band that recycles burnt out musical styles for simple pleasure, you won't be seeing much success - or even positive feedback for that matter.
Seeings as this is your first recording, let me welcome you to the long, hard road of criticism as you work your way up the ladder to musical integrity. Enjoy the ride.