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hai I'm Georgie and I have downs syndrome. I am writing this with the help of my best friend, Myrouk. Downs syndrome is a disease that affects the brain and that makes your brain poopie. You should always be very educated about downs cause it's a serious disease and it really fucks you up. Back to the story-anyways, my mom always took care of me and I really loved her with all my heart she helped me pee and she handled my penis on daily basis, n ow this is where it getsbinetesrings.
Ok, that's my demo. Should I keep writing? I want to write a story about the emotional conflicts an 8 year old kid with downs has to face everyday from his hot red head nurse mom handling his penis to his masturbation mishaps at a new york airport. Yes, this is kinda based on my life and I don't know how to write it. Should I write it from the kid's perspective or the mom's? Should I make it stupidly hot or sad and sexy? Thanks.
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Old 04-26-2009, 12:42 AM
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More bestiality.



So slaggot your mother touched you when you were young?
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Old 04-26-2009, 12:43 AM
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I would suggest removing the down syndrome, and having it from the mother's perspective.
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More bestiality.
Ok, if it's from the mom perspective I'll make her find him fucking the cat or masturbating on a hamster. I'll also make him a Totsean for added realism.
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Yeah the down syndrome isn't hot.
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Old 04-26-2009, 12:45 AM
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I suggest removing the mother, and making it from a flea's perspective.
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Old 04-26-2009, 12:46 AM
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So slaggot your mother touched you when you were young?
I wish.

No, I once went to an airport and saw a girl's vagina through one of those gaps between bathroom doors. That's about it. I was going to kinda elaborate a scene on that, so yeah, that much is true.

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I would suggest removing the down syndrome, and having it from the mother's perspective.
I'll just make him a Totsean then.

I need to get high first.
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Well if he is a HB poster he automatically has a case of the downs.
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Yeah the down syndrome isn't hot.
I wanted to make the fucking as innocent as possible. I also wanted to add a lot of "GEORGIE, STOP DOING THAT IN PUBLIC" scenes.

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I suggest removing the mother, and making it from a flea's perspective.
This is actually quite a fetching idea.

*inhales*

Yes.

*exhales*

Yes, it is.
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Well if he is a HB poster he automatically has a case of the downs.
I'm going to kinda base him on me so that I could fap while writing and I don't know anything about HB.
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I'm going to kinda base him on me so that I could fap while writing and I don't know anything about HB.
You are the physical manifestation of HB.
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You are the physical manifestation of HB.
What's that supposed to mean?



And whatever happened to stripped, damn, she was a good girl.
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I wanted to make the fucking as innocent as possible. I also wanted to add a lot of "GEORGIE, STOP DOING THAT IN PUBLIC" scenes.
The innocence will come just from his youth. If the son were older, it should be from his perspective.
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The innocence will come just from his youth. If the son were older, it should be from his perspective.
Ok, I think I have everything layed down.

*starts writing*
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Write about how you extort your own mother with fake pictures of her touching you. We all know she does not find you at all attractive and would rather touch the neighbors kid.
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Just the words "downs syndrome" make me lose my erection.

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More bestiality.



So slaggot your mother touched you when you were young?



Dont get me started. I wont stop.
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Default Re: My first mother-son erotica, based on a true story

dude get stoned jerk off then like think up fucked up shit not mother son wtf is that like some kid and like his hot older next door chicky lol
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Yeah the down syndrome isn't hot.
orhe he could be fucking a down syndrome person?mom catches him and says NO ...only with me ...my love...my son!
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Just the words "down syndrome" make me lose my erection.
how about "syndrome of a down"?
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